Written and directed
Nathan Faudree as Clarity
||Graham Brown (Artistic Director of trip.) entered a three minute version of Clarity in HBO’s Project Greenlight.
The first round was judged by the fellow contestants
"I thought it was a neat idea. Nobody notices the cow suit or finds the cow to be out of place, so I went with it too. They didn't try to make it too clever, they just made it fun. "
"Good job - it is refreshing to see a scene with emphasis on good performances and writing, and not just on camera angles and lighting."
"Great job! Laugh-out-loud funny. The cow should have his own sitcom."
"Hilarious. I laughed out loud when the cow said that the girl's ass was 'just magical'. Good luck. "
"Thought the dialogue was offensive. Otherwise it could have been cute. Sound and camera shots were good."
"Really entertaining. The dialogue was witty and the actors were great; the cow especially seemed like a professional and had great comic-timing. The video looked great; I especially liked the hand-held footage out the window of the moving train. The lighting and sound were both very professional, and everything was edited seamlessly. The ending was a little abrupt, but I don't think it really needs re-working. Overall, really enjoyable scene by an obviously talented writer/director."
"A hysterical piece. Well acted and underplayed. Unless you feel the cow is a little over the top."